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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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Alex_J wrote: The new green review is a lot more polished than your first post and I like it a lot more.
I think that if you ran the review through an MS Word grammar/spelling checker and gave this some kind of rating (stars or whatever) like in some of the Horror Corner review this review should be greenlit as a feature for the site. NEEDS MORE BITING HUMOR. BEHOLD THE HOLLY GRAILS OF REVIEWS http://www.cheshirecatstudios.com/revie ... t-samurai/http://www.cheshirecatstudios.com/revie ... aughingMan
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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X_SWORDFISH_X wrote: You actually liked the Demonbane review I wrote over the Devil May Cry 4 review huh? Either way, thanks for the compliment. X_SWORDFISH_X wrote: NEEDS MORE BITING HUMOR. I kind of agree, but if humor isn't Chuckysin's thing then a straightlaced review isn't bad. We have a few submissions that were more professional than 'force humor' as some have called our work.  Alex_J wrote: The new green review is a lot more polished than your first post and I like it a lot more.
I think that if you ran the review through an MS Word grammar/spelling checker and gave this some kind of rating (stars or whatever) like in some of the Horror Corner review this review should be greenlit as a feature for the site. Agreed.
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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I'm actually a very quirkey humored type under normal circumstances, but unfortunatly my job has sucked the life force from me. Come march first you might find that I become a little bit more odd.
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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chuckysin wrote: I'm actually a very quirkey humored type under normal circumstances, but unfortunatly my job has sucked the life force from me. Come march first you might find that I become a little bit more odd. SHOW US!! 
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians "The Lightening Thief"
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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Hi Chuckysin If you can run the review through an MS Word or some sort of grammar and spelling checker, we'll post your review  Until then, anybody else have any comments, suggestions or refinements?
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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I thought this review was pretty good for a first timer. Will there be another review from you in the future?
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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LaughingMan wrote: Hi Chuckysin If you can run the review through an MS Word or some sort of grammar and spelling checker, we'll post your review Until then, anybody else have any comments, suggestions or refinements? Laughingman, Ok I'm a cheap ass bastage, so I ran it through my open office word to correct the spelling, not sure if it did much for grammer. I'm sure, as you could mostly likely tell, I lack in grammer skills.
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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chuckysin wrote: LaughingMan wrote: Hi Chuckysin If you can run the review through an MS Word or some sort of grammar and spelling checker, we'll post your review Until then, anybody else have any comments, suggestions or refinements? Laughingman, Ok I'm a cheap ass bastage, so I ran it through my open office word to correct the spelling, not sure if it did much for grammer. I'm sure, as you could mostly likely tell, I lack in grammer skills. Just cause you lack in grammar skills does not mean you cant write well about whats in your head. keep up the good work. As far as the review goes it would help if it were a little longer. rants would help as well especially where the film fails. now for those that did not see the movie the donkey joke might turn off the reader so you might want to include how that came through in the movie. looking forward to seeing any edits 
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Post subject: Re: Percy Jackson and the Olympians The Lightening Thief (editd)
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zimes wrote: chuckysin wrote: LaughingMan wrote: Hi Chuckysin If you can run the review through an MS Word or some sort of grammar and spelling checker, we'll post your review Until then, anybody else have any comments, suggestions or refinements? Laughingman, Ok I'm a cheap ass bastage, so I ran it through my open office word to correct the spelling, not sure if it did much for grammer. I'm sure, as you could mostly likely tell, I lack in grammer skills. Just cause you lack in grammar skills does not mean you cant write well about whats in your head. keep up the good work. As far as the review goes it would help if it were a little longer. rants would help as well especially where the film fails. now for those that did not see the movie the donkey joke might turn off the reader so you might want to include how that came through in the movie. looking forward to seeing any edits I gotta agree with Zimes on this one. It is good so far but far too short and it could stand a few good jabs at the things in the movie that are bad.
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